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Thursday, 17 September 2015

The big explosion - nevaeh


The big explosion.  By Nevaeh   




There is a volcano near the gondola. A little boy is as angry as anger from Inside out the movie. His sister is as happy as a monkey with a banana. Their mum is as angry as a dinosaur getting touched. It's a hot summer day at the gondola and  suddenly there was a huge rumble. Then there was red and orange goop. They knew it was lava so the staff yelled on the gondola!!!!! ''It's all free.'' Quickly get on.'' Everyone yelled and got on them. When they all got off and to the top they looked at the concrete. It was all melted. Then a toddler yelled '' Its,
coming this way" everyone looked. He was telling the truth. There was big orange goop coming up the hills. Then a girl called liv turned up to the problem she was a tv reporter. She was on 3 news. She was really rude. Then there was another rumble.  Then the lava covered the place so they had to jump out the back they jumped into the water. Well they had no choice. Then out of know where it all melted. It took them by surprise because they had never seen it before.   

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