The Yeti
A very long time ago, in the middle of winter, 2003 on the biggest saddest scariest spectacular mountain on earth, (Mount Everest ) as cold as a ice berg, Adam and Eve arrived with their children and decided to live there. I have know idea why they decided to live THERE, but maybe it's because of the pretty snowflakes, or the delicious snow-cones, or the peace and quiet. But there are hideous, horrible, hairy, hungry beasts up there, and they don't seem scared at all!!!
So Adam and his family lived happily ever after for a while, until their naughty little children ran away in the dead of NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! This is why they ran away: they wanted to explore the mountain and have fun so badly, they wrote a note and started to climb up the mountain. They climbed a twentieth of Mount Everest then got scared and hungry. After a while Mother Nature found them hungry, cold, and scared and became as angry as a rhinoceros and a lion put together. So she whisked them away to a hungry YETI'S CAVE!!! Meanwhile at the crack of dawn, Eve woke up as quick as a lizard for some reason. Then she saw the empty beds. She gasped a humongous gasp. She woke up Adam, he gasped too. "The children have gone" she screamed and looked around the room for notes or some clue. Finally she found a note. The note said: We have gone exploring because it is sooo boring here. We probably will be back by dawn. If the note is still here now, come and find us. Eve started to cry like she had broke her arm. "I bet they fell down the mountain in an avalanche, and that's why there not here", and with that, she ran out the door screaming her children names frantically. After a while she gave up and sat down and sobbed.
Back at the cave the children were shivering up against the wall, but it wasn't the coldness this time. There was a big, huge, scary, yeti looking down on them. It was so huge they couldn't see his face. He reached down to pick them up. They were so frozen with fear, they couldn't move. He said to them… where do you live ? The eldest finally had the courage to speak. "I know what you're doing, you're going to eat us then our parents". What no. "I'm going to take you home". "I don't believe you, I'm going home." said the eldest. "OK", said the yeti and took them to the door, opened it and put them down. There was a blizzard outside and it was freezing cold. So the eldest said "never mind I'll come with you." The yeti smirked. We live down the mountain to the left. "OK", He said again. So the yeti took them through the blizzard and down to their house. Since Bob (that was his name) was such a great help and was super starving, they gave him some food and became friends with Bob.
The End. By Alex Prince.
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