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Wednesday, 23 September 2015

The Spectacular Annual crops festival. -Telesia


The Spectacular Annual Crop Festival.
by Telesia Paunga :)

One spectacular sunny, super, sparkly spring day when the flowers smelled as nice as perfume. The birds songs were as special as a gift. the sight was as bright, bursting, beautiful as fireworks. It felt as warm as a hug. Mrs Rose was picking and collecting her crops in the glorious garden because today was the day of the"Annual crops festival". But all of a sudden Mrs Rose realised she had to clean the kitchen, mop the floors, sweep the attic and she only had 1 hour to prepare. "What am i going to do? I have only 1 hour to prepare and i'm not even CLOSE to finishing anything" said Mrs Rose. Just as Mrs Rose started to quickly gather a few more crops Mrs Swift, Mrs Perks, Mrs Ghosh and Mr Rose said "Want any help Mrs Rose?" and Mrs Rose said, "Well I could use a few hands." So Mrs Rose put each person to a Job. Mrs Perks was on cleaning the kitchen so she scrubbed and scrubbed until it was as clean as soap. Mrs Rose came in with one big surprise and said "Splendid Mrs Perks". Mrs Swift had to mop the floors so she mopped the floors until it was squeaky clean. Mrs Rose was BLOWN AWAY by all the sparkles and shines. "Spectacular" said Mrs Rose. Mrs Gosh and Mr Rose was cleaning the dirty, dark, damp attic so they got all the cleaning supplies such as a mop and then scrubbed and swept and wiped until the attic was as shiny as a diamond. Mrs Rose said "Super, now all that is left is collecting 37 more crops". So they collected more crops, they finished as quick as lightning. Great job guys, let's go to the festival". And they did exactly as planned, Mrs Rose was so delighted to be at the festival, in fact she was as delighted as a person to get a gift. After the crop festival they all walked safely back to their homes and lived a happy life for ever. THE EXCELLENT ENDING!!!!!!.

2 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed the story and I love the creativity and similes that went into this piece of work.On the other hand,the yellow writing was quite hard to read

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